Peyton, Wow - music is too dominate. You need to lower the volume - it takes away from your message instead of adding to it. With that said, you did a GREAT job on your introduction and organization of your topics and recordings. At times you talked too fast . . . other times the speed sounded ok. The speed you speak should be a conversation speed. Pictures went well with topics discussed. 93/100 well done
You had a great intro. The music was a little too loud. You had good pictures and they went well with your facts. You talked at a normal speed, and your credits where good. Rate: 95/100
The music was a bit too loud and your voice got louder and softer at different times. Other than that you did an awesome job with keeping the facts interesting. 95/100 :)
Peyton, Wow - music is too dominate. You need to lower the volume - it takes away from your message instead of adding to it. With that said, you did a GREAT job on your introduction and organization of your topics and recordings. At times you talked too fast . . . other times the speed sounded ok. The speed you speak should be a conversation speed. Pictures went well with topics discussed. 93/100 well done
ReplyDeleteYour project was overall GREAT. good job.
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ReplyDeleteYou had a great intro. The music was a little too loud. You had good pictures and they went well with your facts. You talked at a normal speed, and your credits where good. Rate: 95/100
ReplyDeleteI have to go with the others the music was quite dominant. But you still had great pictures and all the other things you needed so 95/100.
ReplyDeleteThe music was a bit too loud and your voice got louder and softer at different times. Other than that you did an awesome job with keeping the facts interesting. 95/100 :)
ReplyDeleteI liked your bucket list because the photos were good and the places you wanted to visit were really creative. 95%
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